Scents delightful, tantalizing, tempting
Lead to a wondrous detection of life.
Aphrodisiac twist of lust, hormones, desire
Spin a natural hunter’s instinct.
Absorb, puncture, relief.
Metallic liquid, sliding, oozing, fueling nourishment for existence.
The Rule of Three is a writing principle
that asserts that, in writing,
groups of three have the most impact.
This week’s challenge is to write
33 words using the Rule of Three
somewhere among them.
It is up to you to interpret the rule, just make sure to use exactly 33 words.
Jeanna
September 16, 2012 at 11:19 AM
“a wondrous detection of life” – very poetic. IMHO-the piece would have more impact without the pictures – they give too much away.
Chelle
September 16, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Thank you. I did debate on the pictures and was on the line about adding them. I think you’re right though.
deanabo
September 16, 2012 at 1:07 PM
ohhh.. I like this one!
Chelle
September 16, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Thank you.
jannatwrites
September 16, 2012 at 1:55 PM
I love the title of this piece. Aptly describes the vampire’s life (and the life of some people I’ve met
)
Chelle
September 16, 2012 at 5:33 PM
Thank you. I do believe some people can be vampires draining you emotionally and mentally.
Imelda
September 16, 2012 at 9:11 PM
How sensuous. The lust for blood was beautifully painted. This is very nicely done.
Chelle
September 16, 2012 at 11:17 PM
Thank you. I’m still on my vampire kick. Lol