Got X-rays?

25 Feb

Credit: Meghan McCabe

“I think we can pull it off. I remember her saying once she’d never been to the dentist.

We’ll leave these teeth, along with some of her things. Everyone will assume it’s her.” 

weekend 33 word challenge


Posted by on February 25, 2012 in Trifecta


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12 responses to “Got X-rays?

  1. debseeman

    February 25, 2012 at 6:14 AM

    Getting away with murder. The perfect plan. Very devious!

  2. Kim at Let Me Start By Saying

    February 25, 2012 at 1:03 PM

    Who? Why? Did they really kill her? Or are they hiding someone who is still alive?
    I like this, I like the planning and the way I’m not quite sure if the person they are leaving evidence behind for is dead or alive. Nice.

    • awriterisborn

      February 29, 2012 at 9:00 AM

      I like the way your mind thinks. Many possibilities.

  3. The Mommy Patient

    February 25, 2012 at 2:07 PM

    Haha, love the bit about remembering she once said she had never been to the dentist and then leaving the teeth. This one made me laugh, which I love.

    • awriterisborn

      February 27, 2012 at 4:07 PM

      I’m glad I made ya laugh. That’s always a good thing.

  4. trifecta (@trifectawriting)

    February 27, 2012 at 8:22 AM

    Thanks for linking up this weekend. Love this creepy response, and all of the questions it leaves behind. Not so in love with the idea of her never having been to a dentist. 🙂 Hope to see you back on Monday for the weekday challenge.

    • awriterisborn

      February 29, 2012 at 9:01 AM

      Some people don’t believe in going to the dentist. Lol

  5. kelly garriott waite

    February 27, 2012 at 11:45 AM

    Neat. So where is she, if not here? And who is here? I want to know more.

    • awriterisborn

      February 29, 2012 at 9:02 AM

      I might have to play around with this one and see where it leads.

      • SAM

        March 2, 2012 at 1:57 AM

        I think you definitely have room to play around. Love the creepiness of this!!

      • awriterisborn

        March 2, 2012 at 4:16 PM

        This story could be fun to explore. 🙂


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