I Just Called to Say I Love You

03 Mar

The last ring overshadowed by her cell phone chirping, ‘You have mail.’

Blurry eyes fumble for the offender. Clumsy push of ‘Read’ button.

Eyes adjust.

She becomes mentally numb.

‘Peek-a-boo! I found you!’

     The phone rang at 4am.

In 33 words weekend challenge


Posted by on March 3, 2012 in Trifecta


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8 responses to “I Just Called to Say I Love You

  1. barbara

    March 3, 2012 at 9:59 PM

    ooooh a stalker! wow

  2. Trifecta (@trifectawriting)

    March 4, 2012 at 7:25 AM

    Thanks so much for linking up to Trifextra. Remember, this weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community, so make sure you visit the site at the close of the challenge to vote. Our linking service will not allow you to vote for a link from the same computer where it was submitted, so plan ahead! Voting closes 12 hours after the close of the challenge. Winners will be announced with the Monday post. Hope to see you back then.

    • awriterisborn

      March 4, 2012 at 6:49 PM

      It was a fun challenge. There are some good stories this weekend. Hard to choose just one.

  3. Let Me Start By Saying

    March 4, 2012 at 10:03 AM

    Now THAT is creepy. Which is good, in this case.
    Came from the Trifextra link.

  4. Nicole Leigh Shaw/Ninja Mom

    March 4, 2012 at 1:26 PM

    Creeper! Oh, a bit chilling. I’m a little tense after reading this.


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